Here is a poem I wrote when I was in grade 9, almost 8 years back! It’s childish, amateur and maybe even cheeky, but its mine! Hope it isn’t too bad! 🙂


Under the bright blue sky,
On the firm hard ground,
Walked a lady, smiling at the daisies,
Looking at the trees around,

Carrying memories of an unknown,
Looking into a familiar past,
As if looking in a river,
With water flowing noisily past,

Remembering someone, smiling in joy,
Mumbling sweet songs under her breath,
Walking on the ground in the sun barefooted,
Caring nothing for her own health,

The sun set at last, with her still there,
Waiting for it to appear, to answer,
The face of reality and truth,
The face of the angel who lit her soul.



About hitomiakiko

Architect and Aspiring Writer

Posted on October 31, 2011, in Poems, Potpourri, Uncategorized, Written Excerpts and tagged , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 1 Comment.

  1. A trail of bread crumbs

    This is really good.

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